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Update #31 - 13/5/2024

🕑 Added 2024-05-13 18:14:12 +0000 UTC

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MrSweetCuckhold

Thank you Jordan ! Maybe someday the husband will get all those photos... 😈🥲

Jordan Li

Loving the descent! I do hope she gets used by more and more guys soon! Also loving how he snaps photos of her- could do with more of this

MrSweetCuckhold

I try to include scenes with the husband in each chapter, but I try to do my best to tell the story with the pages available... As for the end, I don't understand what you mean, but only in two comics did the girls get pregnant.

Dean

What's the point of keeping her married if you make open the hector. I like it when she feels guilty and tries to be a good wife. Another thing why have we not seen him, what's was the point of having a character married if we never see the other half. They should be having arguments over Hector's actions in class. Doesn't feel like she's really cheating on anybody cause by now he's only an afterthought. By your other stories the end will prolly see Ashley getting whored out at the club with the rest of the other girls, maybe a kid or two. Try n break the pattern a little, it's to predictable.

MrSweetCuckhold

Well of course, you know me, I'm not going to turn her into a cock-sucking monster all surgically rebuilt. It would still be her, but with a more rebellious look. Don't worry, I'm not a freak hahaha

beagrius

that something I agree with you. I would like for the tattoo/piercing or body mod to be focused on making her an "exotic" beauty and not simply turning her into a 2 Cent whore

getinge1

Personally I am not a fan at all of the idea of degrading tattoos. I prefer to think of the story as more of her exploring the more forbidden and dark side of her personality she has never explored because she is a righteous law enforcement officer. Hector is a punk but she is having sex with him because she enjoys it not because he locked her in the basement. Tatting her up like a female member of the Yakuza would be hot and empowering but writing I'm a whore or whatever on her is just the opposite to me.

SilentWhisper

By the way, in episode 2, Hector said that Ashley needed a boob job and that they would lend her money for it. She agreed ("Sounds good"). I wonder if you'll go for it? I don't usually like implants, because authors exaggerate and women end up with monstrous breasts. But when I remembered that it had been foreshadowed before, I started to like the idea. Ashley could have breasts like Maya's, just a little bigger, as long as they were round, spherical, close together and not saggy. This could be combined with nipple piercing. Or even make it so that Ashley agreed to one thing and got two (then the element of blackmail comes in - you owe us money for the implants). Or just do a "what if". Hector would force Ashley to go to the clinic, where he would pretend to be her husband, and the doctor would present photos (computer generated) of what Ashley would look like with her new breasts, a sort of "before and after". All in all, I'd love to see her husband's reaction when he sees her new breasts, haha. These are just my rough ideas. Maybe you'll like some of them, or even coincide with your own ideas, and if not, that's fine. I'm glad that Ashley will at least have pierced nipples :-) I hope you have an enjoyable and productive time working on the fifth episode. Take care.

SilentWhisper

That's great, I'm glad we have similar tastes in this. I can't wait to see Ashley with the rings. Hopefully by then - if the occasion arises - she won't hesitate to accept the BBC's invitation to try them out, just like Maya did in the last episode. I think it's a good idea to add more make-up, as it could subtly emphasise her further transformation into a slut.

MrSweetCuckhold

Yeah I'm a fan of the rings too, I think I'll use them on Ashley 😍😍 I also love the idea of the hidden tattoo but for that I would perhaps wait for the last chapter. For make-up you are right, I don't use it often. I'll try to put it in a scene in this chapter if I remember, I often have memory problems haha For release I would say next month, I just did the first scenes yesterday 😞😞

SilentWhisper

I'll paste what I wrote on SubScribeStar: Glad to hear it's nothing serious. Stay healthy! Also, congratulations on your CS degree! Of course, pierced nipples come first! I would prefer rings (they have this slave vibe), but bars will do, as long as they are not the half-open type, which I think looks bad. And they should be big enough in relation to the breasts so that you don't have to use a magnifying glass to find them (diameter of the ring or size of the balls at the ends) ;-) It would be nice if Ashley also had a tattoo that she wasn't fully aware of. E.g. something obscene like "I'm a slut/love anal sex", somewhere on her back or above her buttocks. If it is above her buttocks, I imagine a scene where she is sitting on a chair at her desk during class in one of the front rows, and she is leaning forward slightly, causing her trousers/skirt and underwear to slide down slightly, exposing her tattoo inscription. This is noticed by her classmates sitting behind her, who are shocked. I certainly wouldn't want any tattoos on her face. Later on, I'd like to see a pierced clitoris to complete the picture. And in the next episode, I would love to see Ashley in stockings and high heels (Hector could order her, as a test, to go to school dressed as a slut - miniskirt, skimpy top, fishnet stockings and high heels). Among other things, how about a little more make-up? Any ETA for the UB5 release for the master level? Maybe a pre-release (a few pages now and then, before the full version)?

getinge1

I totally understand the differing opinions as many authors take the changes to a point of absurdity but I am confident you will find the sweet spot to spice things up.

MrSweetCuckhold

Thank you 💜 Well I think you will like the next chapter then 😉

MrSweetCuckhold

You are also on the "few changes" team... you will drive me crazy 😵 haha I'm joking, thank you for your feedback 💜

MrSweetCuckhold

yeah there are so many differing opinions for Ashley's physical change... But you're certainly not the only one who thinks this way. You are probably fifty-fifty. One way or another, someone is going to be unhappy with the choices I make 🤣

beagrius

yeah probably everyone have their own opinion about her potential physical change but I do find her already beautiful so my final "vote" would be for minimal change but at the end the choice is up to you! XD. and glad you like the idea of something like a only fan and may use it for another story later. just thought it would be a nice way to diversify their revenue channel and it worked nicely with a prostitution/escort kind of corruption.

MrSweetCuckhold

Thank you 💜 The idea of having Mike tell Alice the story between he is and Paige had come up to do something different... and I'm glad you're enjoying it !

MrSweetCuckhold

There are so many differing opinions for Ashley's physical change...I thank you for giving your feedback 👍 haha yeah I love the idea of Onlyfans. I don't think I will be doing it for UB, but it will definitely be in my future comics!

MrSweetCuckhold

Thank you 💜 Yeah don't worry, the degree serves as my plan B in case things go wrong here. There are so many differing opinions for Ashley's physical change...I thank you for giving your feedback 👍

WhiteMosquito

Booze - Ashley looks so sexy when she's drunk with her lovely nose and cheeks coloured in red, cigarettes and a bit of powder nose can be very welcome!!! Congratulations for your new graduation title!

bumbab

I wouldn't like so many aesthetic changes to ashley but I will wait and see what happens maybe I will like it.

William Wagner

Personally, I'd like to see a corruption story that DOESN'T feel obligated to include fake boobs, tattoos, piercings, and Botox. But that's just me.

Jeffrey

Really enjoyed the new chapter of MBTMB. Just finished reading it. I am glad to see Alice continuing to be involved. Seems like she enjoys stories of Mike’s adventures.

beagrius

looking forward for the next chapter of UB. about body mod, maybe some piercing or a new tattoo under her breast or above her ass. and who know maybe later Hector or the Club Manager will start something like a onlyfan for the girls who work for them to increase revenue.

getinge1

Congratulations on graduating computer science. I hope your future endeavors still allow you to continue making your awesome comics. I really like the idea of Ashley undergoing both psychological and physical changes. She looks great already but if at some point Hector and or Maya convinced her to get breast implants similar to Maya's she would look even hotter.


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