Saftkeur
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Jemma valentines wip1
🕑 Added 2018-02-08 06:49:28 +0000 UTC First rough setting of the scene! Pose is still just her "default" pose, I'll get to that later. Tonight was spent positioning the chocolates box in her hand and everything. ^^I don't think I've discussed the concept for this one yet, have I? The plan is to have a mix of treats in the box; a few chocolates, a few tiny people. I haven't decided just yet if the scene will be Jemma picking one out, or popping a chocolate between her lips, or dangling one of the tinies over her mouth; the latter is probably more exciting, but I'm worried of making the whole composition look awkward just to force that bit in there, when it could instead focus on Jemma looking a little more sultry. (biting her lip, perhaps, or sucking on a piece of chocolate, those few tinies she has all looking up in awe as she decides what to have next...) Maybe the middle is a good one, a fine excuse to still tease and show off a bit as she indulges in a chocolate while the other "treats" watch.
...Anyway yeah I've got a few ideas for it, haha. I've also had the realization that nearly all of my works are landscape-format, so this is a fine excuse for something a little more vertical!
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Saftkeur
I'm gonna fiddle with poses tonight, see what makes a good balance between "looking natural" and "showing off". Might try to show off less of her tongue's length but more of how limber it is, for example! Or just have it fully extended like you said, it might work if it looks as though she's teasing her treats (because of her pheromones, her prey are usually enamored by her, so she could be having fun by getting them excited to be next, etc).
Aetius
Here's what I'm thinking, Jemma has her tongue out fully extended about about to eat a piece of chocolate while looking at her other "treats" with an expression that says "You're next". So long as there's a good view of her tongue I'm good.
Saftkeur
Yeah, I think I'm leaning towards a chocolate because I feel like the composition would be better if she was looking down, but I really want her tongue out too, haha. So taste-testing a candy while she eyes the rest of her "treats" is a good way to have both!
Aetius
You know me and how I always default to something about the tongue, like her about to drop a mini on her tongue or something
