Saftkeur
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Momoe maw wip1
🕑 Added 2017-03-17 09:53:14 +0000 UTC Late-late-night WIP! I'm just getting started on another of those "simple" projects, a maw PoV for Momoe. Say aaah!It's rough still, but off to a good start, I think. Her tongue hasn't been reshaped yet - that's just the default "resting" pose for it - but it might stay pretty close to this, I haven't decided yet! If anyone has any suggestions on how this could be spiced up a bit, I'm all ears. I'm kinda toying with the idea of her about to cram some french fries in there, but I dunno if that'd look interesting or not.
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Saftkeur
Hm, not sure if I want to do PoV arms or not in this one! I've done that with a few others already, and it gets a little tricky. Though maybe it'd be good to keep them consistent. ^^ I like the outside scene suggestion, I definitely want to add a little something outside, just couldn't decide what to do; something with fingers seems like a good fit for sure, maybe it could be a semi-continuation to the last Momoe picture I did and have her licking some condiments off her fingers while the guy's in her mouth. For the saliva stringing, I actually really like that one, but I kinda want to save it for another character, haha. One of my more drooly ones would be perfect with that! Though maybe Momoe can share. :D
Perhaps you could add in a tiny man's arms into the field of vision as a POV shot right before you're swallowed? And instead of just a bright, white light shining into the mouth, you could add a scene from the outside world for a little more realism? For example, you could add Momoe's finger being licked by her tongue with saliva stringing off her finger. Just some suggestions. Looks great though!
