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The Vacancy - Page 24

🕑 Added 2024-05-03 20:57:44 +0000 UTC
The Vacancy - Page 24

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TeaBucket

All things I should have caught much sooner, thank you. Will update this with grammatical errors fixed soon.

HP1741A

Grammar nits: Panel 6, bubble 2: "in the hope that" - singular, since TL is only hoping for one thing. "would put you at ease" - this matches verb aspects ("took" and "put"). Panel 7, bubble 1: "any doubt you have" - removes stray word "of".

Tidmouth

I wonder if she got lessons from Starlight about anger management ^^


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