TravelingDreamer
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A Request
🕑 Added 2024-08-11 20:09:03 +0000 UTCHi boys and girls,
I have a favor to ask of you.
I changed the story blurb on Royal Road based on some pushback I received in the comments and reviews. Can you look at the new blurb and tell me what you think?
Comments
TravelingDreamer
Thank you
TravelingDreamer
Thank you
james foster
I like the new blurb, can't really comment on a preference since I don't remember the old one.
JJB4345_80_815
So, it looks good to me. I don't remember what the first blurb was and I have read the other comments and the response about changing it (removing spoilers), so I don't exactly know what to compare it to, but I like it. As it is right now I don't think that it's very spoiler-y while also conveying the overall tone of the story and a general idea of what to expect. 👍 Good job! 👏
