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B3—Chapter 15: Sea Crossing and First City

🕑 Added 2024-07-28 17:05:42 +0000 UTC

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TravelingDreamer

They know bards - it's a magical world. But there are more interactions later on.

Moon Winchester

The only thing I feel like is missing from this chapter is people going up to John after their performance, talking with him and chatting with him since even if they’ve seen cool mystical shit like that even here on earth, if you see something cool like on the side of a street or something like thatpeople usually cheer up things and someone. I feel like there’s an extreme lack of human interaction within the explanations.

TravelingDreamer

Sort of. I added a picture to the post. See on Patreon. For some reason, it didn't "take" in the first upload.

Obran

La Maison de John? https://x.com/viewsoff_/status/1817512423030489495/photo/1

TravelingDreamer

Oops - dropped the T by mistake. Thanks!

Borindak

TFTC! Should the title be First City rather than Firs City, or am I missing something?

Wolve

TFTC

TravelingDreamer

A good day?

Obran

Thanks. Just finished reading Sleyka's new chapter, and then this came along.


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