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B3—Chapter 2: My First “Proper” Dungeon Run

🕑 Added 2024-07-13 13:36:54 +0000 UTC

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TravelingDreamer

See tomorow ...

JJB4345_80_815

Thank you for the chappy! Did anyone get any level ups?

TravelingDreamer

👍🏻

Jacqui Andronicos

This one did feel a little repetitive in a couple ways, mostly the similar descriptive words of the fights. Rue's powerful jaw comes to mind, it might flow a bit better if the descriptive terms are changed to have more differences.

TravelingDreamer

You’ll see soon

Obran

Two thoughts. If they are going to be out in the wilderness, John needs a spell or skill that does something like "Determine Edibility". And maybe gives hints on how to prepare it, e.g. potatoes are poisonous until you cook them and break down the solanine in them. Second. Why does John get the best loot? I'm assuming he gets the core for the boat?

TravelingDreamer

Take away

TravelingDreamer

It’s lore. The dungeon adds it for flash

Doodlyboy15

Thanks

Danielle Warvel

What is TA food?

BlodWedd

is the lore for armor serious? it feels too much. archangel? A hero who fights darkness? is this foreshadowing or flavor text?

TravelingDreamer

Thank you

ReadingObsessed

That was awesome. I felt it was a chunky chapter and that was only halfway.

TravelingDreamer

A dog ... loyalty is their most known trait.

Denis Trenque

I like the voice of Rue, he has a childlike tone, sapient but also single-minder in his loyalty to his friends

TravelingDreamer

You are very welcome

Chong Go

Thanks for the looong chapter!


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