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Chapter 117: Final Preparations

🕑 Added 2024-06-27 13:57:34 +0000 UTC

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TravelingDreamer

Cool!

Fortunis

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TravelingDreamer

😂😂

Obran

Rue on Patrol https://x.com/_B___S/status/1805726767195263144

TravelingDreamer

Yes, most of Earth was traveling. Now they had a small rescue detour that is almost over, and we will be back on the road.

Pete's Place Garage

I hate to be THAT guy, but ... it seems like this latest little arc is taking a lonnnnng time to get to the point. I still love the story, but it seems like it's just taking a lot longer to get to the plot than it should. Hopefully we'll get out of the training montage and get back to, well, travelling.

TravelingDreamer

I fixed it. Can you look at it and tell me if it's better? And thanks for pointing it out.

TravelingDreamer

You will for the circle. What bothered you about the ending? They have a date and a few days before it, so they're going each to their own things. I'm trying to understand the problem to fix it.

Pike

Putting the person's name when they speak before someone introduces themselves feels a little weird. Just personal thought

Doodlyboy15

Ending seemed a little... disconnected? Thanks for the chapter. Hope we get some explanation of the circles


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