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Aghanim's Rubick Chapter 7

🕑 Added 2024-10-15 01:23:33 +0000 UTC

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Zy Writings

He can't copy skills that are unique to peoples personalities. He is not going to get a Great Sage equivalent.

Zerak

Nice chapter, a few spelling mistakes though. I really like the direction you are taking things, and I really really hope you don’t give the MC any skill like Great Sage, or Raphael that do magic on his behalf. Most fic that use those it feels like the MC doesn’t do anything and just lets their skill do all the work. I love the magic exploration aspect of this story and such a skill would kill it. You could have the abilities of the skill, but without the skill controlling them, so it’s still him doing the stuff.

Deathknight134

Brooo, my heart! I can't take it! Happy Shizu is too good! X'3 And Susuru's little turmoil with himself is amusing. Bro's gonna turn into one of The Girls at this rate! Heh. I'm not really against it, but I do not envy him as his mind is likely being slowly altered thanks to this new evolution. If Shizu cries, Rubick must destroy the nation that dared to make someone as precious as her cry in the first Place! I will not be satisfied with anything less! 😤 But at least she has found a friend who will not abandon her and that she always has a home to return to. Poor Rimuru got his girl taken from her, kek. But I'm sure dear Susuru can still join her in the same bed if he tried! ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

Deathknight134

"who had come form" --> "who had come from" "That was just hum acknowledging" --> "that was just him acknowledging" "flow through him as h shook his head" -->" "making him looked like " --> "making him look like" "Sururu" --> "Susuru" "a mile on her face" --> "a smile on her face"


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