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Cooled Passions Chapter 38: Statement of Intent

🕑 Added 2024-08-10 16:39:14 +0000 UTC

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Zy Writings

I will probably include it in the next Shiro POV

Martian

TFC, we ever gonna get to see the convo where Shiro gets declared princess? Think that’s gonna be hilarious.

Zy Writings

The current helter skelter is pretty much over. Ranni's descent gave him the excuse to immediately pull the gun on Yue/Selene, who in turn gave him the perfect excuse to pull the trigger on Valerie. The issue with these two is that it was a time sensative thing to go for, with the excuse they gave for how Ranni found him he needed to use it pretty quicky, hence getting Selene, who in turn would have caused massive issues with the Tepes and Carmilla if he didn't do what he just did. With the objectives complete for now though, I will be able to bring the tempo down a bit and have a few chapters of interactions to settle the characters in to their new dynamics. You saw a bit of it in this chapter, ie: CC and Ranni jockeying around each other.

Feng Lengshun

Also, man, stopping edging us with the politics stuff lmao. Give me my political shitshow in my favorite kuudere political shitshow story gdi. Runeas is interesting - she's a mix of practical and sentimentalist. Out of everyone, she's the only one to not jump to conclusions and take the middle path to find a compromise instead of adding fuel to the fire. Valerie is a bit of a checklist item, but she's too important to ignore if you can reach for her. It does come across as coming out of nowhere though. Personally, I'd love for there to be a character interaction chapter again, with all these new additions, as well as a planning session to allow us to gather our bearings and see Damocles' exact plan (that will inevitably be ruined) and motivation for those plan. I feel like it's been REALLY frantic lately. I get the reason why, in-universe, but from a meta perspective, the word count has been too focused on getting shit down and the plot moving but it's starting to feel disorienting. But I get it, it's a LOT to balance at the current point in story.

Zy Writings

Thank you for the corrections, edited the fixes in.

Feng Lengshun

Nice, a new chapter. I'll think about grabbing a higher tier, once I saw the next chapter, but first, some corrections: > Naomi Randall*;* her sister and my Bishop; Should be comma instead of semi-colon as 'her sister and my Bishop' isn't a new item in the list > spreading my already refilled reserves to cover the entire area of the castle*/* should be period instead of slash > laving signature so they knew I did this. leaving > Annoyingly, the they were rather durable to my favoured Gravity magic remove 'the' > ever since she helped Gaspar escape finally falling blissfully silent. > If you come with me, I can help you see Gaspar again. Gasper.


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