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A Mother's Love - Part Fourteen Is Released For Public !

🕑 Added 2024-07-26 19:59:01 +0000 UTC

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Aplakus100

I guess the amount mystery is left at the end of part 14 its sure the protagonist's mother is gonna get banged up pretty bad and maybe i'm feeling a bit bad because that innocent woman doesn't deserve this .Nicole will definitely face trouble keeping her child safe especially with MC being not around. The climax of this novel will be having more twists than expected but this story deserves a happy ending with chole , nicole and MC living in the same house happily , John behind the bars along with his company out of place and MC's Parents out of his evil clutches

Avi Gamer

Please release part quickly in a month we can wait that long

Visardi

I think this future story is both exciting and sad, anyway this is a very good work, leave us a lot of imagination, Perhaps because of the protagonist of The Punishment, or in the only way to defeat John, I look forward to the follow-up, thank the author for such a wonderful work

Attila Acar

I would be happy if you release it on a download platform other than Mega. Mega wants a fee...

Pagal M10

Finally you are back

Lukas

A brick fell from my heart, but it was a relief. You are back

Klopf24

You are back :)

Fejk konto

An eye for an eye, MC goes for his wife and John goes for MC's mother. Whether we like it or not, it's quite a caricature for John who has no morals. Considering what he did to his friend's wife, he probably has no problem with this!

Sovereign

The android version? plz

Acerus

Man, it will suck if in some updates there are no Nicole/MC interactions. If John gets his hands on MC's mom that will be interesting to see, wonder how she will react if it comes to that. If the author has a story planned in which something happens to MC's mom then so be it, you guys can write your own stories, I want the raw unfiltered story Orb has planned.

balboa2151

Now I remember why I hate John so very much…I own many firearms and if this was real life John would be six feet under lol

Moserdamus

Man, that ending was rough.

Godscoper

Enjoy the game so far I will support the game after it is completed and if something happens to the protagonist's mother John. I really don't want to see the protagonist's mother being trained by John. I will end up quitting the game and never touching it again. That's my option Just like few others here saying.

ItsBastianXD

very good part I can't wait for the next ones to come out

Niro

yeah idk how to feel about the ending....i hope she dont work for em

Daniel

Please don't let anything happen to the mc mom, that's something I wouldn't be able to handle 😢

Attila Acar

I would appreciate it if you could provide a link other than Mega.

Pagal M10

Please don't do this Nicole and MC just come to close and MC just tell him his real feeling please don't separate Nicole and MC and his mom this feeling so bad and hard 😞

mr.b

The plot is so good, I hope the producer will release a new episode soon. For Android

Devilsand

Dear author, please do not hand over the protagonist's mother to John. I really don't want to see the protagonist's mother being trained by John. I hope the protagonist can turn the tables and regain his mother, and I also don't want the protagonist to separate from Nicole. I hope the protagonist can find a way to sneak down and fight John. If the protagonist's mother is raped by John, it's better for the protagonist to rape their own mother. Also, the woman that John has newly trained is probably the principal's wife. Let the protagonist rescue her and bring John down. Victory belongs to the protagonist, taking down John's company and everything is under their control. Let the police arrest John or kill Jonah behind his back