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🕑 Added 2025-03-11 02:54:02 +0000 UTC

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Avyck3721

fixed

Carolyne

You could just remove the ...to and end the sentence with preparations. And leave what preparations to the readers imagination. One thing I like about reading author releases her or on RR is that I can give feedback on this or that. when I find unfinished or odd things in a "published" book there is no way to let the author know. Anyway this is a compelling story.

Avyck3721

I swear I read and reread every time

Avyck3721

Crappp

Avyck3721

Holy crap haha good catch I need to get that

VoidAutarch

“Most of the credit goes to Jared and the carpenters. They’re fast—faster than I ever expected. In fact,” was there supposed to more to this sentence? 🤔

Carolyne

"With that taken care of we make plans for all our fighters to make final preparations to [....unfinished sentence...] The five days in the dungeon had passed in a blur for me.  It might have felt like I barely left but the growth of our small village said otherwise."


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