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🕑 Added 2025-03-08 18:57:04 +0000 UTC

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Darth Bayes

Doesn't he have two classes?

Avyck3721

lol we can all use more cougars

HikinBear

I really missed the foreshadowing statement: ‘...the Supreme Ruler grew to power by gifting her class to those she deemed worthy.’ Yeah, if only Mischief can find some other Cougars. Great for growth!

HikinBear

Suggestions for classes: Shadowborn Assassin – Be one with the Shadows and strike enemies with brutal efficiency. (not chosen because class embraces murder even though it matches Mischief) Solo Explorer The true explorer goes where others fear to tread. Cartography skills map new regions while Interpreter allows conversing with new peoples. (Not chosen because he wants to build and have a new home and not be lonely) Zone Mentor A master who teaches a wide variety of Skills to groups of allies. (Too limiting)

Carolyne

You could have him scan past a list of "common" generic sounding classes. Add in one with a unique name that obviously is a bad fit and have him only "look deeper /expand view" on his chosen class and then the system assigned him his class because he opened it. But this will leave him without the chance to look at his class choices and he will be stuck basicly with luck/chance making his build. Not him making choices. It would be in character but does not allow for growth. I suggest he looks at the overview of a couple classes and then goes back to the one he wanted and gets "you are choosing..." As he opened the class for the second time. This leats the system assign his choices and still gives him a way to make choices in the future. Without him geting a Y/N decision system prompt.

VoidAutarch

This way he can even gain access to elemental affinities like mages do . A magic battlemage/weapon master with space and time affinities would be pretty dope. He's already fast but with teleportation and slowing his enemies down before defeating them will be awesome to witness . I think a magic weapon master/battle mage class can make him a progenitor as well . He can't be less than Mischief after all.

VoidAutarch

You mean for his fighter class? And yeah I kind of wanted to see his class options as well. Though it makes sense that healer should be defensive oriented when he already has a fighter class . It would be redundant to have two offensive options unless the benefits offered are extremely unique . For his fighter class, I definitely want him to a magic weapon master class. For now he only uses the sword but I did like to see him increase his repertoire of weapons . A class that lets him use weapon intent that has varying levels of proficiency and benefits. Something like sword intent for exampld . magic spells that work well with the weapon intent would be preferable . He has healer abilities when it comes to magic but he is missing mage or wizard like capabilities. And since he likes to fight, strong weapon skills is a must . He also possess spirit weapons that grow with him . A spirit weapon through which he can utilize his weapon intent to make his magic spells stronger . Basically a Battlemage in a nutshell. A battle mage and a healer would fit the MC perfectly. A battlemage who uses his weapon mastery and weapon intent to enhance his offensive spells to defeat enemies. Let me know what you think .

Avyck3721

Also any suggestion for classes? I knew the class I wanted for him but I didn’t want to just throw out some generic ideas

Avyck3721

That class will upgrade independently for now once it reaches level 25. And I agree I should show more classes I plan to adjust the chapter to show them I’m just behind and wanted to get the chapter on patreon

HikinBear

Like always once I make my decision the class locks into place… What decision? He was offered one class. You should show at least two other class options so the reader understands how the system operates and understand Layton’s thought process. I would think this becomes important later when Layton uses his authority as ‘Warden of Judgement’. Also, Layton had two classes: Healer and Warrior. Does this new Class Evolution combine the two or mostly upgrade the Warrior?

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Edit suggestion: Note even spells not cast by the user. -> Note: even spells not cast by the user will benefit. placing pieces already -> putting the pieces together already


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