[Early Access] Take Off S2 Ch.99 "Parallel Paths"
🕑 Added 2023-09-26 04:28:58 +0000 UTC| Previous Chapter |
It's here!! So many subway scenes!! I think last chapter I got something wrong: the ACE trains at Canal street is not Chinatown, but oh wells reverse gentrification let's goo. I dedicate this chapter to my love and hate relationship with the MTA🫶
I hope you guys like this one!! And also remember to sign up to be on NSFW Zine Two's acknowledgements page by October 20th here: https://forms.gle/Yuumo5hydL31miye6
Thank you all so much for the patience as always and I'll see you guys soon with the camping smut😎
Comments
Danyell Jones
I love the end!!!!
PixelatedLove(。♡‿♡。)
Yes, I agree. He just looks so down that u can so clearly read the emotion on his face. Poor baby 😞
PixelatedLove(。♡‿♡。)
Ugh 😣 Im not patient enough for this. . I hate this for them. I hope they can both get off their trains and meet up.
persophonebae
The ANGST. I CANNOT
persophonebae
WHATTTT THIS IS AN ILLEGAL CLIFFHANGER 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
TheRealSnickers
My brain keeps screaming "show him the phone goddamit! Do it! Do it now before the train starts moving!" Gah, my screams will go unheard and into the endless void of anxiousness
Lannah M.
I am waiting PATIENTLY for the next chapter. I am waiting.... SO PATIENTLY...... ahhhhHHHH I need them to reconnect SO BAD
Alexis Zoumberis
Andrew looked so freaking SHARP in that outfit 😭 Nathan…you’re going to have to RREEEAAAALLLYYY make it up to boyfriend.
TAC
Your drawing of dejected Andrew communicated his feeling so clearly!
Love
The anxiety 😫
shebe96@live.com
IM SO DEAD!!!
Michelle Watson
OMG! I just want to uuuhhhgg! *Me put my hands on author’s shoulders, shake them back and forward aggressively🫨 and screams “WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO US, STOP TORTURING US.”🥲. I just want to see them together and happy. But I will wait obediently😇.
Samaruo
I will reiterate my comment from last chapter… #paintrain😭😭😭 Here’s to hoping it’s a short ride to clear the misunderstanding and we can finally see our boys get a date 😭✨✨✨✨✨✨✨
Melon
Hahaha amazing episode
JJ Connell
*in Darth Vader voice* NNNNOOOOOOOOO
Tice Spire
WHAT😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
jui
Gahhhh it means so much that you noticed the title being placed in the middle!!! I’m glad it did what it did even if by a little✍️❤️
jui
💕💕
jui
Idk if it’s just me missing drawing them on transportation but gah the subway scenes make me happy💕
jui
So so close!
Wezzleh
JUIIIIIIII 😭😭😭 Andrew I s2g if you don’t break down the train door now, imma jump in and hit the emergency strip on both damn trains so you both get off the train. GO TALK TO YOUR MANS NATHAN!!! RUNNNN
Kiki
Ahaha😭 nonono you can't do this 😭 I mean it's good that he knows that he is at the wrong location but 😭 it's heartbreaking to see them so sad. I like how it feels that even though Nathan is in a train full of people he is "alone" at that moment - especially with the big city and "darkness" in the background. And on the other side Andrew who looks so lonely in that restaurant ( the waitress is probably feeling just as sad as everyone 😭) and he looks sooo sad 😭 like a puppy you put outside while it's raining! Please just give the man a big hug! And the spiral he is going down is so relatable. Lol in that one panel where the advertisement says "I hope" I was like "Yeah me too! I hope they run into each other!!". And I was hoping he would look up from his phone! I wouldn't have survived if one didn't see the other 😭 The whole scenario from both of their perspectives, Nathan wishing time would stop and the end where it probably did stop for them for a moment (and also feels like it from the outside) - that was great! And I love how you divided them and showing their parallel paths by using your Title right in the middle of the chapter! The movie feeling is on point. Thank you Jui and your Team for the great chapter 💜! And the background work is awesome as always 😍 it feels really nice reading through it.
Charliie Kreitzer
I want to hug Andrew so much 😭😭 You'll get together my loves ❤️
Ugh1ife
WAHHHHHH
VioletDash
Noooo Andrew baby he desperately trying to get to you 😭 god I hope with that train part and they saw each other we get their reprieve pllleeeeeaasse your not a nuisance he likes you so much Andrew his phone is busted 😭🥺
Tamika
😭😭😭 why you two stupid trains are keeping them apart we need them to be together! 💔
Meghan Matibag
Nooo. I dont want Andrew to be sad.
The Moon Kissed Witch
Noooooooo 🥺
Janoha Novella
Daaaang... IN A WAY, we're touching on that "fate" conversation some chapters back.
sekacecir
Noooo why u do this to us Jui 🤧🤧🤧🥲🥲🥲🥺🥺
julia sanchez
His little sad face broke my heart 💔😭
des
NOOOOOO can they both get off the trains in time!!!
Kat V
I always read these chapters waaay to fast. 😢
Jo
Noooo! Not them seeing each other going in opposite directions! 😭
Fibber Fox
The gap of misunderstandings is only as wide as the space between 2 subway trains.
Logan Morace
TEASING ME FR FR
Roses Haller
Like frrrrr🥲🥲🥲 my heart, I think I read it too fast 😭😭🙉🙉🙉
Kat V
Next chapter right now please and thank you.
Reina J. Ruiz
Your subway scenes just do justice representing NYC I love it so much, but that last scene 😭😭😭😭
Yahir Garcia
YOU CANNOT DO THIS TO THEM OR TO US MANNNNN😭😭😭😭
Roses Haller
😭😭😭😭😭😭
Maddi Willis
My heart 😭❤️