Shannon
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9/14 UPDATE: PARTIAL SCRIPT READ/SEMI-ROUGH FOR FIRST SECTION
🕑 Added 2023-09-14 17:28:24 +0000 UTCLINK HERE to video rough in case the above embed didn't work!
I had a bunch of the script in a polished format so I figured I'd do a read through of it real quick on OBS and explain my thought process and give notes as I went! Like a quick semi-rough for the introductory segment of the video, maybe the first couple sections.
But then I started adding clips to it (after it was recorded) and kept adding clips and kept adding clips... and now it's hours later and there are a ton of clips in there to where it feels more like a partial assembly cut or something?? A lot of pieces are missing, I just kind of threw stuff in to play around with it, and it's unlikely any of this VO recording will make the final cut. I may even cut/reorder/change all of it.
When I started adding clips in, though, I couldn't stop, because it was so fun to feel like I was actually working on the edit rather than still being mired in the reading/writing/research phase. I have to be careful on clip selection in this video because I don't want Curtis to come off as boring or for Lutsko or O'Malley to come off as grating. So anything in there now is subject to change.
But I am feeling really good about the video :) This was very fun to do, I'm glad I put it together for y'all! Cause now I have a pseudo rough cut I am having so much fun tinkering with even thought it only covers a small portion of the script.
I'm open to any notes or corrections on this as well if y'all have any!
Thanks as always!
Shannon
Comments
Little Onion Sprout
You didn't make him come across that way at all. it was a good balance to show his range.
Shannon Strucci
Thank you! I'm so glad! I admire Lutsko's work a lot and don't want him to come across as wacky/random with out of context clips
Little Onion Sprout
really excited to see where you go with this! so far i dont think the lutsko bits felt grating, I'm glad you included some clips to give us a feel for his music. I enjoyed Pearl's cameo :)
David Rodríguez Madriñán
This was cool, and I hope you do find a place in the final video for the lutsko mel storyline, introducing all the "characters" being short things is fine if you go into more detail on them later and get all the good stuff there. PS: pls try to make the clips volume match your mic's my dog can't take it lol
![MF [MALE FOCUS] from patreon](https://fapscommunity.com/kistorage/8544.jpg)
