Toxic Candy pg 7
🕑 Added 2019-05-22 03:15:53 +0000 UTC...I'm tempted to do a follow-up where Violet suggests "Targaryen" would've been better than "show poodle", but 1.) Mercy might not get the reference, 2.) Vi shouldn't be watching Game of Thrones, and 3.) I have too many follow-ups planned as it is...
Updated - fixed some typos, and made some additions & alterations to the dialogue. I've had a lot on my mind this week, so I may make some further tweaks before the public release...
Comments
Angelo B.
Yo, I love this scene but I smell a very plausible misdirection.
Kenneth Winkelman
Something tells me that Mercy is just getting warmed up to "DISH" out some more courses for Candy to chew on.
Richard Handy
Oof, that was a stunner!
Brian Christy Burke
Just because she shouldn't be watching it doesn't mean she hasn't. ;)
Oscar Rios
Well done sir, excellent story telling.
Graeme Thorburn
Ouch, right in the DNA.