「Stockholm syndrome」part29 (END)

I really like the ending you've changed! A beautiful story!

The twos met their ends but I'm glad they had a good time together. Had it not for the smoke they would never escaped. Thank you for your hard work!

素晴らしかったです！

Whissu

You changed it to a happy ending! Master Kas is so generous and kind, always making people happy. Thank you for your kindness! Shiawase~

bobennings

I think it's lovely that you revised the end for fans to be happier, we love Koko and Debo.

カス

Thank you for your comment! Maybe the newspaper found an error in the news and corrected the content. I believe coco and debo will be happy.

カス

Thank you for your comment! Maybe the newspaper found an error in the news and corrected the content. I believe coco and debo will be happy.

カス

Thank you for your comment! Maybe the newspaper found an error in the news and corrected the content. I believe coco and debo will be happy.

カス

Thank you for your comment! Maybe the newspaper found an error in the news and corrected the content. I believe coco and debo will be happy.

カス

Thank you for your comment! Maybe the newspaper found an error in the news and corrected the content. I believe coco and debo will be happy.

カス

Thank you very much!

カス

Thank you all for your comments! Maybe the newspaper found an error in the news and corrected the content. I believe coco and debo will be happy forever.

tcomj295q

Just a suggestion, if you’d like to change that one or to last pages from dying in prison to something else, the ending can be something like “the two escape from jail mysteriously and disappear. Only few rumors about them then and there but they are never seen again.”

robochacha

Seeing them die in prison makes me so sad ;w; I hope they're together in the next life!

hikaruginno

I must admit that I feel happy and sad at the same time. Happy that they'll be together forever but sad about them rotting away in jail. I guess part of me wanted for Master Kas to break them out of prison. Maybe take them with him. But I guess, he would only intervene so far in this scenario to make sure they are left in peace. Either way, it's a bittersweet story, beautifully drawn and written. Thanks again for your amazing works, Master Kas.

manticoraus

Oh well needed some morose zing to tie it off. But yes. Theywere together un interrupted I. Devotion until passed on. Softly sad. Brightly sweet. Thank you Kaz. This more upbeat and longer, to me, heartfelt tale was more successful with only some parts feeling off. Mainly the supernatual/hypno elements as the relationship and psychological simmer to boil to eruption worked so well. Thank you for the tale. And as.take time off look forward to your heroes.

tcomj295q

Ah I wish you delve into their lives in prison abit more and more happy ending outside the prison having normal life….not die with a disease rot in prison and poof done. Too sad😅 Except the ending, I love the story of these two very much. Congrats!

FrostTiger

Thank you so much for making such a beautiful and compelling story. By far this is my most favorite of your stories. And i look forward to it one day getting a physical publication. <3. Keep on making so much good work. <3