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Chapter 11

🕑 Added 2024-05-03 03:00:02 +0000 UTC

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DevonHexx

I look at it as he just needed to cool off and consider things. His arrival on Tewadunn was sudden and violent and there was never any time to talk to anyone and process what had happened. Then, once they were free, everything came at him at once. He rejected the situation without thinking about it but once he calmed down, he was able to reconsider.

Trevayne

I figured something like that was going to happen. It would be a pretty short and depressing story if it didn't. I am glad Mitchell changed his mind, but it does seem a little out of character for him. I would have expected him to ask Alora just how things would work if he stayed before just announcing that he would stay, particularly after just having a big argument because he said he wanted to go home. It just seems a little off. One alternative would have been if Alora told him that she wanted to send him, back but they need a few weeks or months to gather resources for the attempt. That way he has to stay with them and gets to see how he can be useful. It allows for a more nuanced process of changing his mind.


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