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Chapter 66

🕑 Added 2024-11-15 03:00:05 +0000 UTC

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DevonHexx

Ha. Should have anticipated that.

DevonHexx

One thing I plan to do on the second pass is to work on my descriptive language. It tends to take a backseat to getting the story out but I’ve been trying to remind myself to include it now to save on more work later.

Codewrds

Chapter 69 needs to be an interlude. Do it for the meme Devon!

Josh

That was incredible, and I love how vivid all the descriptions were.

Codewrds

That's it! That's the solution to the identity politics and racism! I'll just take over the world and enslave everyone, then let them rise up and defeat me once a few generations have passed! Exept good authors tho, I still need my book fix, so you'll be fine

DevonHexx

Got it, thanks!

Josh

> had been in Lorivin a couple of weeks prior and was particularly upset about the long weight times to get past the city gates *wait times


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