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Chapter 58

🕑 Added 2024-10-11 03:05:00 +0000 UTC

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Alex

I love this story and feel like Allora when she needed mana. More, more, MORE!!!

DevonHexx

Awesome. And yeah, it goes hand in hand with my desire for the women in Mitchell's harem to have had full lives before they met him. They weren't sitting around in stasis waiting for him to show up, they were doing their own things. Allora is slightly different in that respect for reasons I've explained before, but Lethelin definitely had a lot going on in Varset before she left it behind to chase after Ivaran. There are more glimpses of that world she inhabits coming up in chapters 67 or 8, give or take, as the story nears its conclusion and you'll get to see her playing a much more central role in getting everyone to the goal. I'm looking forward to seeing her shine as well after so long kinda in the back seat. But she reveals those bits about herself reluctantly, some for personal reasons, some for professional.

Josh

Plot-wise it makes perfect sense that Lethelin isn't the highlight at the moment. But also, I'm enjoying the air of mystery and importance about what she brings to the table, and I like that we don't know right away.

DevonHexx

For simplicity and brevity, this first book focuses primarily on Mitchell and Allora when it comes to backstory and the like. Between world building, pacing, and getting to know the cast of characters enough that--hopefully--they become meaningful to the reader, throwing in a lot about Lethelin would have slowed things down a little too much for my tastes and added a lot of length. But I have plans for her to get a little more fleshing out in book 2. Additionally, she's been largely out of her depth in wilderness environments, but book 2 will have more combat and more situations in urban environments. She's a city girl and that's where she shines. I gave brief glimpses of how much more at ease she is in civilization with her actions in Besari and Delikir, the little town where they fought Dakath. Skulking about, scaling walls, sizing up the locals, spotting the other thieves and pick pockets in the crowds, that sort of thing. That is a portent of things to come for her. Out in the wilds she doesn't have much to do. But that will change when she's back in her element.

DevonHexx

Got it, thanks.

Josh

I love the mystery around Lethelin. I look forward to finding out what high guild status she turns out to secretly have.

Josh

> “And why wouldn’t you be?” the old drill instructor said as she handed him a cup of something warm and floral scented. Crossing first Iletish and then the Peaks on foot? No easy task. You earned a slow morning.” Missing doublequote before "Crossing".

Codewrds

I'm so hyped for this


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