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Chapter 51

🕑 Added 2024-09-20 13:15:01 +0000 UTC

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DevonHexx

Ah, I see what you're saying. Just needs a re-wording. I'll take a look at it later.

Codewrds

No, I saw the first one. I meant in the sections I pasted. A sentence like "... The energy blasted into the orc, before recoiling again into Mitchells hand, burning him for the second time"

DevonHexx

His reaction to this battle has a connection to something I read about with soldiers returning from war. The special forces guys almost never have PTSD. You see it most with grunts running around following orders. Special forces guys have objectives and are given a lot of latitude in how they achieve those objectives. The big difference in their reactions and levels of trauma seems to stem from agency. Special forces soldiers are proactive. A lot of grunts and frontline soldiers are reactive. That seems to play a big part in how they deal with the violence and brutality of combat. So I included that sort of reaction into Mitchell's response to violence.

DevonHexx

I thought I made reference to it in the fight in Delikir with Dakath and the thugs. I'll go back and check. *edit* It was in the first fight with the wolves in the cave. He fired an arcane bolt spell point blank into the wolf and it seared his hand. I didn't follow up with an explanation about why, though. I guess I thought it was obvious.

DevonHexx

That's a bit of self insert on my part. Music is a big part of my life and for Mitchell it's a way to keep him connected to his long-lost Earth. It reminds him of who he is.

Geo

Solid fight music choice. I really do enjoy Mitchell’s reliance on music as a way of coping with stressful situations.

Codewrds

I might be totally overlooking something, but I think you might have forgotten to write down the part where he actually gets burned by the Arcane bolt. At the risk of losing his weapon altogether, he freed up his sevith hand and planted it on the big orc’s chest, firing an arcane bolt at point blank range into the leather armor. Mitchell flexed his sevith hand and felt the burning along his exposed fingers. It was the second time he’d gotten that injury from using arcane bolt at such close range. 

Trevayne

Good update and a look at how Mitchell's feelings are different going into a battle by choice, not just defending himself or try to escape from captivity. Edit suggestion: I think this line needs a with inserted so he needed to be dispensed quickly. would read as follows: he needed to be dispensed with quickly. dealt with might be better than dispensed with


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