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Chapter 38

🕑 Added 2024-08-02 03:05:00 +0000 UTC

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DevonHexx

Tune in next week! Same Bat time, same Bat channel!

DevonHexx

I try to be careful not to include any fluff. The book is already long enough so I try to make sure that, if I've included something, there's a reason. It's advancing the plot, it's advancing a relationship, it's advancing character development, or it's adding lore. If I'm taking the time to write it, it better have a point, otherwise, it has to go. And, if you remember from the relationships post last week, when they come together, it will be meaningful. There will be time for fun little frolics later, but not their first time. Same with Allora.

Josh

Mmmm, I love how this is bringing them closer, and I appreciate how you're still pacing things and remembering time and place. Many stories would not have held off; I'm glad you did.

Trevayne

Interesting, if they are trapped, who did it, or could it be a delirious Allora trying to create a warm space and putting herself into something like suspended animation? Also, good to see Lethelin finally realizing why she is here.


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