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VR Adventures - Fantasy World pt 2

🕑 Added 2023-05-12 23:00:10 +0000 UTC

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Syd

Yeah they can feel everything as if they were there ;)

Xenaborn1715

Is their VR tech as advanced as SAO? Or are they role-playing being able to feel their pain and their scents? (I'm hoping it's the SAO tech cause I love imersive VR. Plus that would mean they could actually feel eachother 👀)

Joe Bors

I honestly feel like I'm reading a furry version of Eragon and I love it so much

Gabbo The Fox

Oh wow 👀 i love it

Matcha Foxx

Wow, this side series is extremely well done! It all taking place in VR means it can be written differently, yet still take place during the main storyline. Amazing work, I hope this continues!! 😊❤️

WaayRon

I see. Yeah living among people who speak the language you are learning is the best. It sticks to you. Trains could be another interesting topic. XD

Damián Otín Lucero

I love these so much. This one had me on the edge of my seat haha, Can't wait to read the next one

Syd

Haha thanks! I lived in California for 5 years for college, that helped in the vocabulary department 👀. Incidentally, that's where I wrote my first gay short story lol. Although, if i knew i would've had to read it to the whole class, I would've written about trains or something lol

WaayRon

I absolutely love these side stories! Man, reading this one was so great! How everything got confused at the campsite, Sky running towards Leon’s ‘faint’ voice I knew that there was something clearly wrong and the voice was sure not Leon’s. Then the full moon and the creature… I got massive goosebumps and the shiver ran down my spine! You are great at storytelling and I’m absolutely amazed that you are not a native english speaker. Man, you are good! If I could have an english vocabulary that rich! And of course the arts are lovely too. :) This comic is the only reason I created a patreon account and I know that it worth every penny.

Thingymabob

Mods are readers of the comic, confirmed, and onboard the S.S. Skeon....Leoky....? Whatever their couple name will end up being lol

Syd

Oh you know they are in invisible mode watching everything 👀

Syd

Muchas gracias! Me gusta mucho escribir suspenso asi que no pude evitar meter un poquito jaja

Yan Wind

Now I'll read everything while imagining Sky and Leon roleplaying alone in their rooms, thank you =p

Thingymabob

Really enjoy these side stories, fun reads to sit down with real quick. While Sky was bandaging Leon the stupid idea of a mod coming out of the bushes saying "HA! GHEYYYY!!" before fading away made me laugh.

Baku

Sinceramente, esta historia maneja muy bien los tiempos y las emociones que desarrolla, además de que la ansiedad que provoca tener la bruja al acecho esta muy bien lograda y la forma en que Leon y Sky se acercan a través del juego es demasiado tierna, son historias fantásticas, sigan así

Syd

Thank you! I'm a bit self-conscious with these short stories since I only have like three days to write them and English isn't my native language. Comments like yours give me a huge confidence boost, so thank you 💙 💙 💙

Syd

Lol yeah I know what you mean. At first I didn't plan to make it so immersive, but after writing a couple paragraphs I realized all the scenes felt shallow. Also, when I began writing about them feeling pain, the first thing that came to mind was the WoW episode of South Park and I couldn't stop laughing at the idea of Leon and Sky writhing around their rooms haha

Black Lion21

dude.. your writing is amazing! it is immersive, engaging and brings all the emotions to the reader! The construction of the relationship and complicity between the protagonists is really well done. I can't wait to read the next story!

Syd

Haha Heru said the same thing when proofreading

Yan Wind

Loving the idea so far, and quite surprised when it was mentioned they could feel things. Given the fact it is all a VR game, was expecting to focus a bit on 'oh my character is hurt, let me pretend to be in pain.' Not that I disliked, just got me by surprise. Loved their little feeling session!

Luke

I thought I’d found a plot hole with the full moon then you pulled the rug right out from under me! That was a good twist lol love the story so far ♥️

;w; Such a lovely moment between Sky and Leon, even if it was a little dire. Thank you so much for sharing this new chapter and the new illustrations, I will be eagerly awaiting the next!

zukizumi

really good read!! the interaction was so cute and wholesome at the end too 🥺

Kasai Young

Absolutely Amazing Can't wait for this to continue

Zeph

Absolutely loved this chapter! Felt the suspense and confusion, and I love the little romance sprinkled in. Zero regrets creating an account for this 😁

Syd

Thank you Luis! That's a really nice compliment! 💙

Syd

Thank you! This one was a hard writing for me. I had to keep it short, but also have a general slow pacing for suspense. Hopefully I managed to build a little confusion when they were in the campsite lol

Luis

It is the first time that I pay a patreon and I am happy to do it with such an incredible project nwn

ErmDawg

This is super lovely, I loved this. it was cute, even spicy at a time, and I have a huge soft spot for horrors beyond human comprehension, loved imagining the witch. The pictures were likewise super cute. grand job again again

Mauricio A

Estos capítulos son muy emocionantes, los adoro <3

Syd

Most likely! <3

Shadow

I want to have their kind of wholesome relationship it is just so adorable.

Niuhi

Please let there be a part 3

Rebecca Cole

<3 ahhhh


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