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Amber | Chapter 50.

🕑 Added 2024-03-27 07:56:59 +0000 UTC

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Typos and impressions: It's good to see that the demon is just as arrogant as before. "she side stepped to the side" -> Redunant. Should be either "she stepped to the side" or "she sidestepped". Thrusting her hand into the demon's open wounds and then burning his blood? That rocks. I did not expect her to use that skill in that way. "Needless to say that sometimes, it didn’t take effort and other times she had to cut herself open to achieve it⁠— this time it was the latter." Wouldn't it be the former, not latter? If she's heavily bleeding and covered with her own blood she wouldn't need to cut herself. Or did she already use that blood to fuel her skills? Trying to feed your own arm to a demon? Never change, Amber :) "unfortunately for her she kept her arm hole as she was thrown away." "hole" should be "whole". Can Amber really be trusted to take care of that super fancy sword? She keeps wrecking them! First, she was given the Sword of All Mortals... but bent it when fighting the Fireblessed Velstalker. That fight won her the Firecursed Sword... which is now dented from her fight against this demon. She then borrowed swords... at least two of which are now heavily damaged. Blacksmiths must love her for all the extra business she brings.

phantom

Of course she is punching up. That is normal when class quality is not equal. As one story I read said the higher the level you are the harder it is to punch up. I imagine the reason is because at higher levels those there also have high quality classes or such.

Mohammed Sheekh

I like the chapters so far, I'm just concerned about the power level of the enemies and how Amber overcomes them. it looks like Amber is having an easier time fighting enemies than are a lot more higher level than she is, rather than enemies that are more or less on the same level.


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