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Corpo Age - Chapter 64: Tempted

🕑 Added 2023-10-30 11:10:00 +0000 UTC

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Thanks for the chapter Can you make a discussion post or collection so you can give theme and we can give ideas, something I am noticing it's the amount of mistakes the mc it's making by not first gaining as much strength for himself with the system and starting a corp without a single connection in the corporate world, that's you asking for a group to gang up on you and many other things, I didn't like the UNKNOWN STEALTH corps ops team that save him from some chapter ago since he is supposed to KNOW how to remain in stealth and counter it with his knowledge. This is just my thoughts on the mistakes and what not about the MC and what to improve, you should put a warning in that chapter(when the corp ops save him) saying something like (This it's important for the plot) or something like that.


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