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Monthly Update: A little side project to recharge...

🕑 Added 2025-03-08 02:24:07 +0000 UTC
Monthly Update: A little side project to recharge...

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Momoiro Software

Hm, I think that's fair, but it's partly an effort to have a simpler story this time around. The concept is less the girl falling into the characters lap and more about lonely people finding each other 🤔 And it's not simply for doing nothing, Kalan gets Naiara's attention by fishing.

BoxOfColors

I had some time, and I enjoy writing, so I thought of another storyline you can consider: The wolf is being hunted by the city because *insert reason here*. One day, the girl finds herself in the same scenario for something she did. As the mob is about to lynch her, the wolf appears in the last second and saves her from certain death. The wolf outruns the mob and brings her to his forest. She asks him why did he save her. He replies that he never wants to see anyone else endure the same torture he experienced. She can never return to the city and must learn from the wolf so that she can survive in the wild. One day, the wolf becomes sick after eating something poisonous, and now she must be the one to save her savior. I think that gives a good premise where they can foster a more believable relationship. Bonus points if you could think of a way where the wolf needs the girl just as much as the girl needs the wolf.

BoxOfColors

The storyline for your side project definitely needs more work. It leans too much into the trope where the cute girl falls into the main character's lap when he did absolutely nothing to deserve that attraction.

DoctorDiscord

Naiara is so. Damn. CUTE.


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