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[ND] Chapter 162 - Cleaning

🕑 Added 2025-12-15 20:00:08 +0000 UTC

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Brian

Not when she's safely tucked into Corp officer den

Gardor

Ya know, one thing ive always been curious about re: the rest function: can she be woken up? Is she just in an eight hour coma every night? I feel like thats something she should have been concerned about a lojg time ago.

Gardor

"Miss K, meanwhile, was doing… something… inside the blue-coloured zone they’d just finished sparring in.  I couldn’t see exactly what, but it didn’t take a genius to tell it was Anima-related. " I think ya might wanna be slightly more descriptive here. Its just a little too vague, theres no description of what makes her think Miss K is doing anything. "I couldnt see exactly what"-> well, she CAN see exactly what, she just doesnt know what it means. The final description is like, finger twitches, so its not something as elaborate as a martial arts kata, but i think there should be some description of her stance or focused face or twitchiness. Because its a while before you mention the finger twitches.


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