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Brute Force: Chapter 24

🕑 Added 2021-12-06 06:30:49 +0000 UTC

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James Osiris Baldwin

It got some really hurtful reviews on Royal Road, and I admit they got to me and I just kind of stopped writing. That, and no one seemed particularly excited about it. I kept asking for feedback from fans, but didn't get anything other than lukewarm interest.

deb potter

Hoping for more of this story one day. Did it not really get the following you wanted? It's a really cool concept.

James Osiris Baldwin

Thanks! Will fix.

inkaral

Sweet! I love seeing deserving baddies getting their comeuppance! One edit: "The one one the other side took one bullet to the chest and another to the face that sent him staggering back, his bow falling from dead hands. Angel returned to her forward fire as he sagged over the window ledge." I believe the "one one" should have been "one on"? Easy fix.


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