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[SEC] [Arc 1] Chapter 34, Part 1 — Crypt of the Gods

🕑 Added 2025-08-01 10:17:20 +0000 UTC

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LittleVixen

I really really appreciate comments like those. They give me so much insights about what the reader sees from their pov and gosh, will you be in for surprises. I won't spoil, but

Reppyxz

I guess I’m caught up again…. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. Now I actually have to wait for more chapters. You said you wanted feedback on the tone change? To be honest, I don’t really notice any difference. Maybe it’ll become more apparent as we get more chapters. I mean, I guess the tone is different because Maera and Asche are pretty much a couple now? I mean, I think so. There’s no declaration of this being the case but… Well, anyways, that’s really the only difference in the “tone” I can notice. I mean it’s nice I guess. I’m not a huge fan romance, so I don’t think I have much else to say on the subject. Well, I guess I find the relationship to be, what’s the right word? Unrealistic? Unconvincing? I guess I don’t think I see the chemistry between them. I can kind of see why Asche likes Maera. even though it comes across more like a crush, a crush of born out of loneliness, and a lack of warmth from anybody else in her life. To me, it seems Asche fondness towards Maera, is something born from trauma, convenience, fear, and a bit of Stockholm syndrome. If we look at all the characters around Asche, who could reasonably be her partner? And actually understand her. And I think there is nobody besides Maera. Maera is somebody Asche can’t hide her feelings from, because of their soul bond. With all these factors, it seemed inevitable that Asche would get a crush on the MC. Maera, I don’t really get why she likes Asche. Then again she has a lot of the same problems that Asche has now that I’m thinking about it. So basically they’re together because of Stockholm syndrome and they’re both sad and lonely people. and so they’ve both romantically trauma bounded in a way. So I guess it’s not unrealistic. It’s just superficial. So yeah. I just can’t imagine them having any healthy long term relationship. I feel Like I don’t really know anything about Asche, she’s a gremlin? She’s powerful, she has some dragon blood (when she had blood that is) Asche come across as more of Maera’s pet then any sort of equal. Well, that could be very intentional on your part. I feel like we know Maera better than Asche, but there’s just so much about Maera that I know, I don’t know about. Also, it’s also very possible Maera will not continue having a positive opinion of Asche, once she realizes that she’s been sort of betrayed. It’s hard to say how egregious the betrayal is without knowing more of what exactly Asche is contributing and withholding. But I think that that’s exactly the problem. Asche is hiding stuff from Maera at her most vulnerable point, (that we’ve seen so far) Maera, just slightly, to extremely small degree, let Asche in. And in a way, she’s immediately punished for it. Yeah, I don’t know, this romance is doomed from the way I see it. I mean, I imagine they’ll work out eventually. Because I’d be surprised if Asche isn’t the ‘female lead’ Well, I guess I was wrong, I guess I did have a lot to say about their relationship. I’m really excited to see how the system interacts with Maera and Asche once their integrated. I wonder what kind of classes or species the system will pick or call them. Anyways, thanks for the chapter. Hopefully? my membership won’t expire before we get the next one. But if that happens, oh well. I wouldn’t regret getting the membership.

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