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Chapter 50: What does it take to change our minds?

🕑 Added 2025-01-21 13:00:12 +0000 UTC

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Leonardo Phipps

I can neither confirm or deny what those guys were up to. But I get what you mean, I've been trying to work on my pacing. It's not in this chapter but it might be noticeable in Thursdays chapter. I hope in a good way.

Casual Ham

I think pacing was fine. If anything it felt a little slow. They basically just kept walking and saw someone doing something suspicious (presumably tied to demonic cultivation)

Leonardo Phipps

Was the pacing too fast, or was it deep immersion?

Casual Ham

Dang, this one felt like it went quickly. Hopefully they can talk their way out of this one.


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