DenverJem
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TIOM P.93
🕑 Added 2023-11-15 22:47:47 +0000 UTCI think I realized that I made this sex part too long. Some people have pointed this out to me. Probably for many TIOM fans this part may not be too much appealing and lacks pathos. I will try to speed up the last pages before the next story part without losing quality. Anyway, I decided to do a poll soon to find out what you think about it... if you want to express your views and opinions on the matter in the comments on this page, please don't be shy ;)
Good criticism helps me optimize my time, and hard and constructive criticism helps me make my art better. knowing what my audience thinks about this is important to me because TIOM is aimed at you and for making you feel good. Peace and love!
Comments
TCoffin
I enjoyed the length. Things seem longer when you watch them release page by page, but for a work with a focus on the erotic I think it's a good length. It's the first time the characters really fuck after all, so that should warrant some extra focus.
Red
For what it is worth, I do not feel like this scene has gone on too long.
