DenverJem
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TIOM P.95 WIP (Pencil + Layout)
🕑 Added 2023-11-06 18:34:05 +0000 UTCFinally the sex scene is over. I don't know if this last page is actually effective as a closure to the first official full sex scene in TIOM. I have to admit that I would have preferred to be able to make it more porn than erotic, I don't know, I think it's because of the female soul that tends to romanticize things. Obviously this isn't meant to be a gender stereotype, but I have to admit that I often struggle with trying to be more slutty than erotic and, vice versa, sometimes playing more with the erotic than porn. This often doesn't make me completely satisfied with the sex scenes I describe in TIOM as well as in my previous comics. I know, everytime I complain about my work, sorry, I don't want to be a victim but I think I have a little of impostor syndrome ahaha!
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Great to know, and absolutely yes! The opinion of all of you helps me a lot to understand if I am doing well and where I need to improve. Thanks :)
Dill Pickle
If it helps, I think every scene in this has been porny and hot
Thank you for your words and appreciation, TD. It means a lot
TD Toms
This is your creation and your style. Everything develops and evolves, and through each page, you have demonstrated your ability to express this story in an engaging and intentional way. I'm looking forward to seeing what is coming next.
