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Chapter 316: B Rank

🕑 Added 2024-08-18 11:31:40 +0000 UTC

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Thirteen Life Legion

Yes. Fixed. Thanks.

Botond Kovács

Thanks for the chapter! for holding the followers of your deceased believers: this should be "holding the souls of..." no?

андрей ткач

Thanks for the chapter!

nugitoBambino

can't wait :)

Thirteen Life Legion

Awesome. And that afterlife especially is going to be fun.

nugitoBambino

of course, I am always happy to help my favorite author! And yeah that helps a ton! I feel like it reads much more smoothly now. I'm curious if that external energy storage capacity is also helping Aalam pick up all the additional soul structure skills. Still, I don't think that needs to be addressed - that's my curiosity lol. By the way, I think the soul structures were an awesome pick, a really fun ability set that makes a lot of sense for Aalam.

Thirteen Life Legion

Thanks so much nugito. I made modifications again this morning and I think it should make things much clearer.

nugitoBambino

yeah i just double checked the previous chapter and I think this line is adding to the confusing mix "Second, B rank races permanently bonded to a cultivator or monster’s soul. This meant stripping away someone’s power to artificially lower their rank like he’d done to Diana, Vanar, Raven, and the sadly deceased Wen—as well as his own clones—would be nearly impossible without the other party having an undying nature like his master". I can see some potential outs so this all still makes sense: the 'nearly impossible' leaving the door open, the interaction between the souls of elementals and their power fundamentally different that it's an exception, and why that might be true for the clones but not the original. But I think you need to add a line or two to address the 'why' and 'how' in more detail. Well, you don't have to but I think it'll run a lot smoother in the chapter that way.

nugitoBambino

I feel like the 'what' is clarified (somewhat) now but it seems like it comes out of nowhere, and the 'how' and 'why' are still unclear so we lack context. When we learned about elementals we knew they: were made from law energy, couldn't survive naturally in the prime material, had the highest known inherent affinities, and had two great racial abilities (soul of primal elements, essence conversion). How this translates to the clones, and only the clones, able to lose power but the main body can't doesn't seem connected to anything else we learned. It also feels like it's doubling up/an unnecessary addition with the Alashan skill we learned about to lower the universal suppression so even their base souls will count as lower rank than they are. I can conjure up some potential rational and examples - maybe the skill won't track as they advance in rank and only ever drop them a single rank even at higher grades, maybe they want their clones to be able to go through D rank portals which they will never be able to do otherwise even with the skill, maybe the clones can be reduced in power because the skill lets them regrow those soul structures if they die and anytime they use it like this they're sacrificing that clone. But I think as it stands this aspect adds confusion since it seems to come out of nowhere and double up with an existing effect.

Thirteen Life Legion

I made changes to the description of Elemental Law form to make it more obvious that it only works on clones. Does the change in description clarify things?

nugitoBambino

yee this also confused me. why does the boost from elemental law form to what portals/universes he enters matter if he has the skill? or are they stacking. when he introduced the skill it just sounded like it needed sublime soul, not a particular race

Kasper Lynderup Jensen

Maybe it is only a problem if he is goes back to the prime material universe before he masters the skill. I don't know if he only weakens the barrier if he is in the universe or if that doesn't matter. It could also go the other way and the skill only helps him cross portals and such, and the draining of the barrier is unaffected by the skill.

Arkeus

So there is going to be a transition phase where alaam's soul will have B rank burden before he can master that skill? Or has he crafted something to take care of that...


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