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The Challenge App: Day 4 [Text Only]

🕑 Added 2025-07-02 11:19:42 +0000 UTC

Comments

Cynel

Like I said before a artifact with a brain

Sean Rennie

You make a great point, that if the TF is meant to be slow this would be a longer story. It could be that in his desperation, Ollie decides to just do a bunch of hard challenges in a row to earn more gems and either buy himself a way out, or be permanently altered and stuck. I'd also wager that our dear author, JohnManTD has a few tricks and twists up his sleeve. That's just my two cents. ❤️

stger

I liked this chapter a lot, but again the question, how many chapters are you planning for this story. After you wrote this the Challenge app will only for this month stay a main story I assume the story will be concluded on day 6 which might a bit fast for a slow tf story. 🤔