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The Carnal Labyrinth - Rounds 6-7
🕑 Added 2025-08-08 13:00:04 +0000 UTCThis is the second-last chapter of this wonderful series! I love the concept of a board game, but to be honest I found it quite challenging to balance all the characters and transformations.
Instead of 5 characters, I think there's lots of potential for a game-like story merged with The Challenge App concept, maybe 2 people competing in a game of transformations and challenges over a long-running series.
Anyway, just some thoughts. I hope you enjoy this chapter!
As usual, you can read it on my website.
Comments
JohnManTD
this is one of my most challenging series to write! so many moving parts to keep track of, so i’m glad you’re enjoying it!
Shakion
I understand that it must be hard to do this, but you've done a great job thus far.
