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The Red Cat's Adventure CH.4 (Sketch)
🕑 Added 2022-12-01 09:17:00 +0000 UTCThis chapter has way more text than the previous one, and it makes me realize that coming up with good enough dialogues is harder than I thought... And I have to come up with a good framing of characters during these conversations too!
I think right now the framing is a bit plain and repetitive. So I may adjust some of them during lineart if I can think of a better framing that is 😂
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Tostantan
Thank you so much for looking forward to my comic ^^ I'll do my best!
Tostantan
It really is 😂 I'm glad I make my comic only 4 pages...
Jeshthalion
Ooooo, this is fun to see, you working on this comic more!~💖 I look forward to these two interacting together, perhaps the young apprentice coming to terms with she desperately needs some training~💖
Peter Varnicrast
Dialogue can be hard to write, but it's also really fun! ☺️ I'm excited to see this next chapter and how Dog Girl plays into it!
