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Side Story - Felian Northdale, Looking For a Place To Stay

🕑 Added 2024-02-03 22:34:14 +0000 UTC

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That makes sense from a timeline perspective, but it ruins the structure of the book (which will become clear in a couple chapters). I may put it at the end, or just leave it as a side story like this, since it isn't super important.

Telchar

Yup. Corruption and nepotism need to be stamped out as soon as possible

Daniel Tabask

The social trouble and the bribery sound like something that should be addressed as soon as possible, lest it fester

Xaver Klein

feels to me like it should be placed just after sami sent away the settlers.


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