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Chapter 402 - Family Reunion

🕑 Added 2022-11-12 21:26:01 +0000 UTC

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Hey, glad you're enjoying my story, and thank you for supporting me. :D Family is often complicated, I wanted to reflect that, and I also didn't want mindlessly evil villains, hence Pacha's character development. I have lots of opinions on political systems. I won't blindly pursue democracy for democracy's sake. Though monarchies have their own problems, the system is moving towards absolutism for now. I have plans for the future, though that's a long ways off.

Jake122

First of all I recently caught up on RR and spent the money to be on your Patreon, GREAT STORY. I have to be honest. I have a teenage mother. I'm a middle child my uncle's r like brothers to my mom's oldest child(big bro❤️) I love her to death, bought her house before my own, that's how much of a mom's boy I am congrats or shun IDC. But anyway my big bro is like brothers with my uncle's they go through their problems like what's happening here just not on this scale lol most of us can't relate I'm sure 😅. But I'm glad to see them getting along. But what I want to say is, please author don't make this half cultivation novel all about democracy sometimes an empire is meant to be one in a setting where the biggest fist rules maybe take a note from kel kade and her story of kings dark tidings where the 3rd child of the imperial family is sent off to learn basically everything without them knowing their royal. In order to make a competent king or emperor in case shit happens to the first or second child. And make it a tradition or whatever u feel is the best way. But, when literally a person can kill whoever the fuck they want if they accidentally use too much strength and it can't be wide spread since apparently any monarchy that tried ceased to exist it's not entirely equal and things need to be adjusted from a democratic view as long as the one or ones in charge keep a more sane mind.

Yeah, that makes sense. I might have to put these chapters here earlier than I did. As for the poisoning: It's slow-acting heavy metal poisoning, so it might take a while before it takes effect, especially on a cultivator. It's gonna play a bigger role in the story, just not now.

Michael Vonica

I was thinking of the great grandfather conveniently dying, and Pacha coming in to place blame on the Ichilla elder, saying that he poisoned off the great grandfather to try and get the top position as elder back. But pressuring the Ichillas works too. Seems off to wait a month or two after the crime to go and punish it, though.


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