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WIP#2 - Sakura Onsen 2022
🕑 Added 2022-08-03 19:23:09 +0000 UTCSorry been a bit slow recently… Anyway here is a update post!
The drawing has soooo many more errors than expected… for the characters on the right side, I never expect soooo many of them actually need such amount of rework…
Especially for the back girls on the top right corner, their scaling and anatomy ratio is all over the place! After quite a lot of fixing, I can confidently say they now look a lot better!~
For Izumo, initially I wasn’t going to draw her full body… But after checking, I realize because I didn’t draw her full body previously, her height and scaling is completely wrong! It makes zero sense with the height she is in, since if she is kneeling then she is too high on water, if she is standing she should be showing her knees a bit… So now after fixing her quite a bit, I decide I will just give her a full body so I can make sure her scaling is correct this time!
I also gave Yukikaze a full body pose as I realize this helps spacing the character better instead of clamping them all together like previous version. (sta.sh/0gdlbo59o9i)
As for the 3 girls in the back, it isn’t necessary for them to have full body, but just in case I extend their torso a little bit so I have more room to move them around if needed~
Anyway, hope you guys enjoying the WIP so far, just a few more girls and I will finish linearting all the girls… Just a bit more…>x<!!
Comments
Thank you~ I am glad you like the fixes so far~~ヾ(＾∇＾)
I won't consider myself fast at all haha..(^～^;)ゞ but ya this drawing have soooo many errors need fixing, I am just glad it is all fixed now~~ haha yep~ I used the original aerolae size at first but it doesn't look good... So I just give the girls some upgrades XD thanks I will do my best~
xylaphone
Glad that you are working on this one again. Take your time, it’s looking very good already, especially with all the details your fixing
Druže
Wow, it's really coming together! It's kind of amazing the speed you're managing to do this at, you really must be going hard at it. I wouldn't say it's slow at all, especially considering the workload. I must say, I am liking the small adjustments you're making to the girls in addition to just redrawing and fixing errors. Don't think I haven't noticed the areolae sizes changing, for example! I think it makes each girl just that little bit more unique, it's cool stuff. Keep it up, as you said, just a few more girls to work on!
