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π₯-Omegaverse AU part 1- Pages 1-5 π₯
🕑 Added 2022-08-28 23:15:28 +0000 UTCHey everyone! Thank you so much for your patience~ Here are the first 5 pages of the Omegaverse AU story. I also included the first page here in this batch, for easier access for everyone.
Phew, this is the longest Patreon comic that I've worked on so far.
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Ok, so I wanted to give this one a bit of plot too.... pron with plot for once~ π I had a lot of fun working on this one.
And this is the context in which the whole sexy times begin. This batch doesn't have actual nudity or s*x but it's really steamy and brings up Omegaverse topics, so I'm still keeping it in the NSFW realm.
Part two will come in September, so stay tuned! ~
What do you think will happen? π€ Will Trevor fall victim to Max's irresistible charm, or will he be able to keep things professional? ~
Really hope you enjoy! π
Comments
Punnynn
Hey crazzeewryter999! Really glad you enjoy this scene! ^^ Yeah, same, I was really reserved if I should try creating a comic with the omegaverse trope, since there is a lot of non-con/dub-con in most of the works that I've researched, and that isn't really my cup of tea ^^; but then I decided that I could try and give it a bit of a different spin, switch around dynamics a bit and see what comes of it. I'm really glad you enjoy it so far and hope you'll have an entertaining read as I continue to create more pages of it ! ^^
crazzeewryter999
Awe, this is such a sweet scene, even while still being sensual. I must admit that I'm usually not a fan of a/b/o stuff; respectfully to those who enjoy it, the "lost to pheromones" and "can't control myself" is a little trigger-y for me. But I really like how this story has an Omega in a position of power, and Alpha is the one pining at his side. It's a great balance! I look forward to reading more!
Punnynn
Hey Loifavl! Ah, thank you very much for the suggestion! ^o ^/ Oh, yes, I will include the scent and make it more obvious in the next part. I do admit I'm still new to the omegaverse theme, I just started researching and reading some series that include it recently, so I'm still learning haha! It's helpful to have some feedback to it! At this point it didn't yet hit Trevor that Max had went into heat (and it would not yet be fully blown), so he's still able to rationalize, but as things get more serious, well, it will become more and more difficult to do so π I want to give it a bit of a crescendo haha~ Thank you! Glad you like the first part~ <3
Loifavl
Nice start to the omegaverse AU! Might I suggest to incorporate the scent of the pheromones a little more? Heat s*x should be a little more wild and Trevor seems to still have a pretty good grasp over his thoughts and actions. His desire meter should be bursting to overshadow his reason meter (though not quite yet) :D
