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-QUALITY CONTENT EARLY ACCESS EPISODE- EP142 EDIT + EXTRA PANELS
🕑 Added 2022-11-11 12:20:03 +0000 UTCHello everyone, hope you're having a great day!
Like the title said, I decided to do a few changes to the latest episode before posting it on Webtoons. After reading some of the comments, I realized that in the previous version it wasn't very clear how Max felt about all this, so I decided to give him some extra inner thoughts and reactions.
Changes and extras:
Max is in fact very nervous, but he's trying to hide it so that Trevor doesn't feel awkward or rejected. That's why I added some more text and an extra panel for that.
I also changed the dialogue in the last panel, making Max ask Trevor if he wants to talk about the day. By this it's meant to show that Max doesn't want Trevor to feel like how he's acting is wrong, but instead encourage him to feel comfortable and open up. I think this feels more natural and in tune to how Max would react, since he has high emotional intelligence when it comes to making someone feel accepted.
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I also included the screenshots of the changes for easier notice, along with the entire episode ^^
Hope you enjoy!~
Comments
Punnynn
Thank you, Miri! I'm really glad that you enjoy the updates made to the episode ^^ Yeah, I feel like they give more context and depth to the whole situation like this~
Punnynn
Rumor has it that if you wait in a changing room for long enough, one might walk in on you ðŸ¤ðŸ˜‚
crazzeewryter999
I want a Mmax. Where do I get a Max????
Miri
i like the additions for highlighting how Max feels and also that he is trying to relax the situation by offering to talk about the day rather than the tense situation rn, it feels like that would relieve trevor surely 😌
