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Chapter 101 - The Race

🕑 Added 2025-01-17 00:25:53 +0000 UTC

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John Doe

Bless you! That had bugged me, too. :-)

Timothy Nugent

Tweaked the chapter a bit. Specifically the helicopter scene. It put the live stream on a delay, so Blake doesn't look so stupid for giving away his plans. Thanks Detrox for the feedback.

Laura Pilkington

whoop! good thing Oliver figured out that healing potion, Blake needs the boost

Undead Writer

Thanks for the chapter!!

Valeri Milanov

Great chapter!

John Doe

I predict that at least France and Canada likely were prepared. Both of those governments have historically "Thought Outside of the Box" and seldom give a damn about what anyone else thinks of their actions. Hehehehe! :-)

Thundermike00

Absolutely, that's a great point! I would be really interested in a brief story that contrasts the governments that took him seriously with those that viewed him as a joke.

Thundermike00

I love that you’ve chosen to dive right into this as the next chapter! As readers, we’re all in favor of you introducing a diverse cast of characters. Whether they become tyrants wielding their power thanks to the document or emerge as invaluable allies for the main character and their crew, we’re eager to see how they’ll shape the unfolding story. Bring on the intrigue!

John Doe

If nothing else, Blake's whole (warts and all) approach to D-Day has DRAMATICALLY changed the original timeline. Consider how many Domers (and governments) took him seriously and were prepared this time, vs. the first timeline. Not bad for a High School drop out with Bad Hair issues. :-)

Timothy Nugent

Next chapter 😀

Thundermike00

I really enjoyed the ending with the aircraft destruction! It added a lot of impact to the story. I think it would be interesting to explore different perspectives, especially from those who doubted him versus those who believed in him. It could provide valuable insights into their reactions and preparations once what he predicted came true. Overall, great job!

John Doe

Well, That Was Different. Heh! :-) As they say, Author; "That solution was not on my Bingo Card"...

gideon ferrier

Loving it

gideon ferrier

Uuugggg don't stop there

Bakerbob

Great chapter!! Usually, outlandish scenarios like dropping a moab on civilian or wasting milions of tax payers dollars to make a point makes me cringe, but that whole debacle was well written and there are many rumors about a certain US president ready to burn his own country for the sake of smelling their own farts and needing to be carefully managed by his advisors

Lance Wheeler

Wow

jerome

Excited to see where it goes from here

Jamison Schneider

Really looking forward to next chapter! 😄

Timothy Nugent

Lol. To be fair, he already had on a backpack and a quiver.

Jamison Schneider

First thought: you should still accept a parachute in case you have to use both spatial steps... Second thought: Told you so dummy


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