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Chapter 21 - The Injury

🕑 Added 2024-07-03 13:00:08 +0000 UTC

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Timothy Nugent

I updated everything from chapter 20 and on and mentioned the idea of a 'kilo-nano'. From now on, everything that is shortened will have a 'k' after it. Thanks!

Timothy Nugent

Hmm, I like the kilonano or meganano idea. Thanks, I might change it!

Ihsan Gunay

You can give it another name. Call the currency kilo for example. Or call a thousand nanobots one nano. Or even better just assume nano bots are more powerful and he only needs a thousand to increase his stats.

Timothy Nugent

But, the reason for the 'millions' is each nano refers to an actual nanomachine that invades his body. Logically, he would need far more than thousands to create changes.

Ihsan Gunay

That’s exactly the reason you should ditch the extra zeros. It confuses readers needlessly without adding anything to the story.

Timothy Nugent

Thanks for reading and subing! Perhaps I did a poor job of describing what is going on. It is always millions of nano, however as you said, the numbers would be ridiculous, so he 'visually' reduces them by a thousand and has it round them. That way, it's not so ridiculous to look at. However, they are always millions of nano.

Ihsan Gunay

Hey man, you are interchangeably using thousands and millions for the nano reward scales. You should decide one and stick to it. I think it makes more sense to use thousands because as you write the novel, numbers will become ridiculous if a faction costs a billion nano.


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