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Chapter 78 - Results

🕑 Added 2024-11-11 18:23:45 +0000 UTC

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John Doe

P.S.: I hope like hell that someone is doing quality assurance testing on Blake's brother's alchemy output. I find it REALLY hard to believe that the guy is suddenly a conscientious and hard working straight paragon of the community. The behavior of Substance Abuse practitioners/victims seldom turn on a dime. Maybe in fiction, but not in the real world.

John Doe

I think that the author is intentionally writing our favorite protagonist as noticeably blind to this obvious Elephant in the room/story. Imagine the psychological damage that anyone would suffer after living 10 years during the "End of Humanity". On the surface, one could appear to be functional, rational and sane. However, in the case of this Main Character, this "willful" ignorance about his friends not being the same people he knew in the other timeline, hints at psychosis or mental illness induced by the mental trauma of ten years in Hell. Call it PTSD on steroids or an adult holding onto (his teddy bear) any linchpin to sanity that he can (in this case, the only thing he could rely upon in that timeline was "his team"). Everyone who is reading this noticed the incongruity of the protagonist trying to put his old team together again, so I am sure the author is quite aware that this is a mild form of dissociation from logic/reality. What if the author is hiding the M.C.'s mental illness in plain sight? It would be a hell of a gotcha' for the readers if this loose thread of the "hero's" sanity is just waiting to unravel when certain stressors are later applied? Hmmm? Food for thought, eh? :-)

John Doe

Please! For the love of God, don't do it, author. Yikes! :-) *shudders*

Lance Wheeler

A government run spin-off of his town would be good

John Anastacio

I've been wondering if Rajesh was a government spy. His sudden arrival and change of heart seemed suspicious. I figure that is less likely now, but still not zero.

Undead Writer

Thanks for the chapter! Glad his father pointed it out. However I think this team is doomed to fail without him. I don’t think it’s bad per say, but I think they will eventually split up into their own groups lead by Rajesh and Montgomery specifically. I also think that the woman, can’t remember her name right now, will start her own team. I think that will be smart and allow for three teams to compete and grow in their own ways. While Montgomery’s team will be more risky, Rajesh’s team will be more subdued and carful. While the woman’s team will be about in the middle. At least that’s what I think. Also, still think Rajesh is a traitor! XP

Jamison Schneider

Finally, can't wait to see his mom in action 👍

Over Lord

Keep up the good work

Danielle Warvel

Thank you, Dad, for pointing out the EFFing obvious to your son! It’s about time!

Eric

Tyftc

Timothy Nugent

Next chapter is full combat.

Proxy

Welcome back, I'm looking forward to the new chapters. I'm hoping to some more combat, and potentially some more townbuilding, since those are my favorite. Also, the government guy joining the team, but that's probably some ways away. I forget his name lol

Timothy Nugent

I'm hoping to get more written this week since my parents are no longer in town visiting.


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