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Chapter 71 - Training Rajesh

🕑 Added 2024-10-16 13:00:08 +0000 UTC

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Lion3125

Oh and I thought he was an engineer, not a scientist? Big difference in terms of trying to grt foundational knowledge

Lion3125

There's actually a far bigger problem that Blake sadly seems to not consider. He didn't know his friends until a few years in the future. People change over a few years, while most won't change completely, there will most likely be some noticable changes. And that's without an Apocalypse happening. On top of that, people change depending on their experiences. The moment he reached out a lot changed. Will they basically only be in danger within scenarios and feel mostly save on earth, or will they lose every friend or family member, with some starving in front of them, struggling to survive. Vastly different experience that will shape how their personality changes over time. So they will definitely not be the same people he once knew. They will basically clones with fairly similar behavior, but not the same as previously. The same is true for the friendship between them. Vastly different circumstances and most relationships are developing in a certain way due to random circumstancial events, that won't repeat in this version of the timeline. Meaning the people are going to be different, and your relationship with them will be completely different too. That in itself might not be a problem. If you're just recruiting them as a competent, high potential 'asset', it's likely they will still fullfill that role. However, you have spent years with someone with mostly similar behavior and appearance. Most people will not be able to differentiate between the two versions. We know Blake doesn't. He thinks of them as his friends. Which is a huge problem if they are doing things a few years in the future that his past friends wouldn't ever have done. I've read a few stories with a similar premise (apocalypse & time travel), and somehow almost all authors had their protagonist do this mistake, except one or two where the MC went something along the lines of 'Unless I basically only knew them pre apocalypse or not at all, I will avoid the acquaintances from the 'past', to avoid bias, if I run into them I'll basically treat them as stranger, because essentially that's what they are.' And honestly? Something like that is the only sensible position here, unless you are somehow able to not think of those 'clones' as your friends, in which case... I guess I'm both impressed and I'll have to ask: What's wrong with you?

John Doe

Really good conversation, author! "“Why not only complete scenarios, then?” “Because it’s kind of hard to say no to saving a family who’s trapped in their house.” “I suppose…” Rajesh agreed, doubtfully." Rajesh has obviously attended the Dale Carnegie Course: "No good deed goes unpunished, 101". :-)

John Doe

I also, would hate to see Talen go. I can relate to his perspective, but I am willing to let the author expand upon Blake's seemingly illogical trust of others. I strongly suspect that the author is setting up Blake for a "teaching moment" in the future. The old character development by getting burned, trick. Now that the author has stated that Rajesh does not intend to go to the authorities, I see other forms of betrayal on the horizon. In my life I have worked with many more individuals like Rajesh, vs. the kind and trusting type like Blake. Thus, it is easier for me to understand/accept Rajesh's (likely) brutal self interest approach to life and survival. Of the people that I have professionally interacted with, I would estimate that 90 to 95% of them are like Rajesh (even if they are a not usually as obvious about it, they would sell their mothers for a fix/profit/short term gain). 2% are inexplicably trusting and altruistic like Blake (I remember one Physician/Priest that I worked with in South Dakota...really nice guy. People took advantage of him a LOT.), and the other 3% are confirmed (usually via court conviction) homicidal/sociopathic. Of course, I spent most of my adult life working in City/County/State/Federal government, so the class of people that I encountered might not be an accurate representation of psycho/social traits within our population. Blake's type are out there, but I seldom met many of them who were sane, functional and fully employed. Heh! *P.S.: I also may have dramatically under counted the homicidal/sociopathic cohort. I met and fought way too many of that demographic, too. Heh! :-)

John Doe

Thank you for this post. We readers were indeed freaking out about this issue. Yes, you are no doubt thinking: "No shit, Sherlock!" Understandably, so. :-)

Laura Pilkington

I think a lack of obvious motive for the change of heart is why everyone is so immediately suspicious of Rajesh that his character is a curious scientist and therefore asks many detailed questions about the operation also does not help with the distrust 😅

Undead Writer

Excited to see where this goes and it would be a very interesting development to see our MC face the reality that people after the end of the world think differently than they do now. Rajesh betraying the MC by just reporting all he knows to the feds who found him after possibly doing an experiment with the collective that caused him to show up on their radar is actually right up the alley of this awesome story. The Feds then interrogate him and force him to do this so that he can keep their freedom. Give up a guy he barely knows speaking craziness to keep the feds off of him is very rational. I can’t wait to see how our MC deals with the feds on his tail and a betraying friend! Looking forward author! Thanks for the chapter!

Undead Writer

Thanks for the chapter! Don’t trust him AT ALL! Red flags, red flags! I wouldn’t be surprised if our MC has to kill his former friend to save the world. Just because they were a friend in the past doesn’t mean they are a friend now. Very easy to get blindsided by that.

Timothy Nugent

Sorry to see you go. I will say, quite a few of your predictions are accurate. Rajesh DID study the nanites at his university where he had access to expensive equipment. When that effort failed to return results, he sought out Blake for more answers. Of course, Rajesh doesn't have a PoV yet, so the reader doesn't know that.

Talen Drake

So were I Rajesh, who is already doing nanite research, I would have proven the existence of the nanites and started subverting them. In the meantime, I would be draining Blake of every scrap of future knowledge I could get, and then, with my know-it-all personality, know that I could do it better. Hack the Collective, build my own faction, etc. Does it need to be a full stab in the back betrayal? No, but in no way am I actually tied to someone so naïve and at risk. Outside chance if things go exactly right, that I tell him what he is doing wrong as I leave him and cut all ties. Who wants this idiot as humanity's only hope? Fact of the matter is, he isn't the only hope if someone else better equipped uses him and steps up while actually using their brain. Blake is just too dumb and emotional for the role. Only thing that is saving him is the MC hero halo aka Plot Armor. Honestly, Rajesh might actually be a more sympathetic character for me. I prefer smart characters that let emotions and morality shape the nuance, but are more logic driven. That being said, I wish you nothing but success with this story. I am sure there are a bunch of people in this world who can relate to an emotionally driven character like this. I am just not one of them.

Crapgeezer

I'm pleasantly surprised Rajesh is actually truly interested/committed. NGL, felt a red flag last chapter as well. Keep up the good work 😁

Brandon Graham

I think Rajesh is a pretty thought out character. As a scientist and researcher he is always wanting to know the why and the methodology behind it and I think it was even mentioned in a previous chapter that wanting to know how it worked was why he picked up his particular class. Awesome job and thanks for the chapter!

Timothy Nugent

If you knew money was worthless in 3 months, why would you betray humanity's hope for some quick cash? I'm honestly curious what reasoning you can come up with. People won't follow him if he tried to launch a coup, especially since he'd have to kill Blake to gain ownership of the faction. I actually considered both of these options, but neither is plausible, especially since Rajesh is so cold and calculating. Blake and Rajesh WILL have a falling out, but Rajesh always does what benefits Rajesh, turning him into the cops/Feds or usurping him doesn't.

Talen Drake

I know you know what you are doing as an author. I am sure Blake knows Rajesh better than I do as a reader, cause I don't know Rajesh at all. The problem is actually worse if Rajesh doesn't betray him, because literally everyone would in this situation. We don't have any contextual evidence for why Rajesh wouldn't. Maybe adding a flashback/forward to a scene that explains this stupidity would help, but it is leap too far for me. I would have explained my reasoning in a DM, but that isn't working for some reason. In any case, I am not mad about this. This isn't a rage quit. It is just that the MC is too far from my own POV/frame of reference that I can't empathize with him anymore.

Timothy Nugent

Because people are upset enough that they are dropping the story.

Timothy Nugent

Lol evidently not too predictable since no one has guessed what will actually happen lol.

Noon2Dusk

Why the spoiler? :'(

Timothy Nugent

Rajesh will not be going to the police/feds, and will not launch a coup.

Timothy Nugent

Rajesh will not be going to the police/feds, and will not launch a coup.

Timothy Nugent

Blake has a blind spot for his old friends and family, but he is ruthless when it comes to anyone else. He has know Rajesh(although a different Rajesh) for 8 years and fought side by side with him. Blake trusts him, Montgomery, and Jeff completely.

Sean

This feels like the god in double blind that lies to the main character and his friend and his friend basically says "so what, how often do you manipulate people? We shouldn't rule out his offer just because we know he manipulated us to get to this point." Feels like Rajesh is gonna do something dumb and try to stage a coup to get ahead before the apocalypse and Blake's gonna do the protagonist move and try to forgive him. Then like usual, someone else is gonna have to pay for his dumb ass.

Paul Rettig

Kinda predictable

DH

Talen Drake

Yeah, that does it for me. Blake is just too dumb. Lost my empathy for the MC and thus the story.

Lol Nerds

Yea Rajesh Will definitely betray them


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