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Chapter 67 - Biding His Time

🕑 Added 2024-10-04 13:00:12 +0000 UTC

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Timothy Nugent

Monday

box boy b

whens next? chap?

Laura Pilkington

that achievement saved his life

David Ford

Really intense fight scene. I was initially disappointed we wouldn’t see him fight a SAS team, but this was worth it.

Undead Writer

Thanks for the chapter!

John Doe

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ik0mcWXseAQ

John Doe

It will be funny if it turns out that the best place to get solid, uninterrupted sleep/rest for 20 hours is this "instance/dungeon/alt planet". Chill Pill via Blood Loss/Coma... That is one way to get a vacation. :-)

John Doe

Intense. The M.C. may want to reconsider biting off more than he can chew...on a semi-regular basis. :-) Hmmm, workaholic, overachiever, save the world altruism... Who does this guy remind me of??? Heh!

Talen Drake

I mean I would drop the story, but that would be kinda awesome too.

Noon2Dusk

Just a tiny typo, you wrote Kofa one time instead of Koza

Talen Drake

That is some very realistic and suspenseful writing. Well done. I really feel like he barely squeaked by, and might actually die here even now.

Sean

rip Blake, now we follow the new main character, Jessica the nail salon owner!


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