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Chapter 65 - The Next Evolution

🕑 Added 2024-09-30 13:00:08 +0000 UTC

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John Doe

*Sigh* I understand. Disappointed that Christmas won't come early this year, but I understand. :-)

HN

Ok, then it makes sense. I must've missed exactly when they left the rift in my first read through as well, cause I kinda thought the whole discussion was conducted inside the rift, but now I read more carefully and noticed they left quite early in it. Now even I get it. :)

Timothy Nugent

You're right. It should have read a few seconds later.

HN

Counterpoint, right after he enters and puts the ring on: A minute later, his father stood and observed the pile of Manders that surrounded him.

Timothy Nugent

As more and more things fall apart for him, he is going to get more aggressive as well. He wants to show his mother that he is still a good person, but sometimes, you have to head off problems before they come back to bite you.

Timothy Nugent

While that would be very satisfying, it isn't in Donna's character or Peter's.

Timothy Nugent

Flame Shield takes 10 seconds to cast. His dad was there for less than ten seconds. Just long enough to teleport the Manders out and leave. If Blake left the scenario to cast it on Earth, then they would not be allowed back to get the corpses.

David Ford

I did enjoy him killing the cops, not in a psychopathic way, but it drives home that the MC is aware of what the stakes are.

Timothy Nugent

Thanks! I really appreciate this!

Timothy Nugent

Invasion day is at the end of book 2. I'd say it's somewhere around chapter 90 to 100, depending on how the story unfolds.

John Doe

Personally, I dream of the author writing a chapter where the mother loads herself up with rings and other buffs and then takes Oliver aside for a "come to Jesus" talk. Ideally, it would look something like (Hulk vs Loki) this: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=31ZjnrHR8EA :-)

HN

Great chapter, however, why didn't Blake just cast Flame Shield on his dad?

Undead Writer

Thanks for the chapter! Glad to see Oliver is tossed to the side. Good riddance lol.

John Doe

For what it is worth, I follow 4 stories on Patreon and this is currently the one I look forward to the most. Kudos, author! P.S.: I am very much enjoying the protagonist's more aggressive/proactive posture regarding threats to himself and his group. I have little, to no respect IRL or in fiction for submissive, or stupid/passive characters. :-)

Talen Drake

I like the growth of the MC emotionally in recognizing that Oliver is not trust worthy. I also like that a mother's innate blindness to the faults of their child are subtly acknowledged, but she still accepts Blake's decision. I would like to see their father's reaction as well at some point. I'm pretty encouraged overall in the direction this is going. I admit I was starting to worry they would continue until Oliver destroyed the faction.

David Ford

Solid chapter, I am wondering roughly how long we have left in chapters until the apocalypse properly kicks off. I suppose that will probably be book 2 territory!


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