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Chapter 61 - The Final Straw

🕑 Added 2024-09-20 13:00:03 +0000 UTC

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John Doe

Ok, having worked in L.E. and Corrections for 8/3 years in the 90's, I worked with too many co-workers like that. I can't tell you how much that resonated for me. Respect! *Of course, this tower search area in the story is soon going to be crawling with local LEOs, State Police and D.H.S. for the foreseeable future. And, Airborne units will absolutely saturate this area with FLIR for the next two weeks...

Aleas

Yes. Finally

Galenorla

Finally. This took way too long

Josh

Well, if the job is open... 👉🏻👈🏻

Timothy Nugent

Thanks for the catch. I'm firing my editor!

RedFaux

Was probably bound to happen at some point. Something like this at least. Maybe his parents will treat him more like the war veteran he is after this?

Proxy

We’ve got a plan to sneak Montgomery and Blake past them, but we’ve got problems. sneak montgomery and jeff, not blake.

Talen Drake

I don't think that is realistic, however his brother needs to be in detox and under supervision not because using drugs is wrong, but to save him from himself and his bad decisions. Either that or cut all toes, which isn't realistic given the future history.

Half Life

His weak-minded personality will be nothing but trouble in the soon-coming post-apocalyptic world. He is dead weight... actually worse than dead weight. He brings nothing but drama and problems.

David Ford

I like this development. I think one guaranteed way to get the cops off his back would be to just turn up to the police station and drag all of them into a portal

Undead Writer

He should lol

Josh

As far as I can tell he's dealing with severe depression brought down by his years of Parkinson's and going through withdrawal. Now his brother comes along and hails in a whole new world but oh-oh -- he can't finally get active in his life and directly support his brother in his fight but gets assigned a place where he can't choose shit, its just a different cage to him. So no, beating him down is not the solution, I think actually communicating and letting him have a say in this is reasonable.

Timothy Nugent

He doesn't go muderhobo on people.

Josh

I like Blakes spin on the 'will do what must be done to protect his family and earth' protagonist, but I hope he won't go full slaughter mode. He's powerful enough to not escalate things and assume a superior moral position. Not saying the corrupt cops didn't deserve it tho.

DH

I knew Oliver screwed up but this whole situation just went from bad to worse. No way that the whole government doesn’t find out about the portal (and by extension MC and his family). Also I’m so curious what Jeff and Montgomery are going to say about this altercation. They just saw their new “friend” kill someone. Generally, that doesn’t go over too well with folks.

Half Life

There will be a cure for Parkinson's, but there is no cure for being a stupid, whiny, entitled, self-centered b*tch. Even once he is cured of his disease, he will be nothing but a millstone around the neck of his family.

Sean

Yay now he'll have even bigger problems to deal with! I like this but from a non-narrative-just-trying-to-empathize-with-Blake standpoint he frequently doesn't plan ahead. Then again he just does not get technology so I guess this is unavoidable

Josh

Dude if you had his disease you'd be useless too

Talen Drake

Should go ahead and roundup the rest of the Sheriff's dept as well at this point.

Half Life

Good. Now if he would only do the exact same thing with his useless brother all would be well.

Undead Writer

Thanks for the chapter! I think our MC needs to tell Oliver what a B he is being and how he got people killed just because he wanted some stupid drugs. He ticks me off the most. Glad MC has finally decided to go full apocalypse mod now too.


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