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Chapter 55 - Rajesh

🕑 Added 2024-09-06 13:00:05 +0000 UTC

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John Doe

The M.C. is too sentimental and altruistic, but I like the story anyway. :-) If I keep reading, maybe he will grow up later. Heh!

Lauri

If he doesn't learn after this it just gives feeling that the mc is stupid

Lauri

I understand the want to meet old friends and connect with them again. But he should understand that they are not his friends at this point. They have their own lifes. He should not contact them.

Half Life

The way the MC acts like the current world order is already dead and gone is going to really take this story to tragic places. He may be able to escape from the government, but his family is far more vulnerable. And his idiot brother is already a massive enough threat to operational success, without dragging more understandably unwilling people into the mix.

Sean

I'm liking the realism but it does sort of feel like him making a faction and getting people to join is delusional. He's not personable, he doesn't give people time to catch up to him, and he's largely just throwing his problems at his close family while trying to get as strong as possible. The only way I see that working for him is if he finds someone to be the 'face' of his faction while someone else is the 'brains'. As I said though I like this twist. He's not suited to lead and turning back time didn't solve all his problems.

Undead Writer

Thanks for the chapter!

MagicWafflez

sigh. I get that he was your friend in the future, but like... there's probably a lot of character growth needed to make him even marginally tolerable. That said, Blake needed to try. if he didn't try, then it would eat at him forever after. Now it can eat at Rajesh when the world ends and he refused to take the helping hand offered to him. well, he's already given out more help than the guy had before, so hopefully his family will be fine. honestly, I hope he tells the police about the crazy story and gets abducted by the cia ppl. then blake doesn't have to be abducted and can still pass some info to them.

Gabriel Melnik

Damn, I think the nanomachines mentally stunted Blake or something. He could have easily suited up and tried to hook Rajesh up on reverse engineering the stuff.

Danielle Warvel

Agreed. Never start with the asshole friend that basically had to grow on you like a mold before you could tolerate him enough to get along.

RedFaux

Blake... you're a moron


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