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Demonic prophecy-Thilim Purge
🕑 Added 2024-11-25 09:22:06 +0000 UTCThilim’s Legend Continues: The Guild's Downfall
The saga of Thilim advances with her sinister plot to annihilate the guild responsible for the witch’s death in the first act. The assassin who executed the witch receives a deeply questionable reward for her professional precision—an insidious seed of corruption that sets the stage for her ultimate downfall.
Follow the assassin as she returns to the guild’s hideout, eliminating her comrades one by one in a twisted pursuit of power. But when her younger sister uncovers the horrifying truth and attempts to intervene, the cycle of corruption reaches its climax. She becomes the final victim and the catalyst for Thilim’s total takeover. With both victim and killer now under her control, who could possibly stop Thilim?
What’s New in Part Two?
This continuation delves deeper into the themes of corruption, possession, and transformation. Experience a slow and detailed descent into demonic madness as Thilim’s power expands. The focus on possessive transformation and twinning reaches new heights, revealing a Thilim who is even more formidable. Witness her evolution into a devastating giantess with awe-inspiring proportions and muscles of unrelenting strength.
Are you ready to embrace the madness and witness Thilim’s unstoppable rise?
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Comments
Voratus
Well, that is feedback. Holy macaroni. Hmm, I see your points. Much of the colors came from my afterwork. I just brighten it up, not thinking of that color scheme. Hmm, the possession. Is your main turf, I am just a visitor. And that is visible here. I wanna go to fast to the transformation. I Try to remember it for the next time at least some of it. Thank you Very much , SENPAI... XD
Ovidius Naso
Overall, this is a good video. I like the story, theme, the corruption, the transformation. But I have some feedback: - I feel like the TF progressed too quickly. My favorite part is about halfway when she gains the upper body muscle. But since she's so big at that point, the rest of the TF feels lacking. - the color palate is very muted; the whole thing is yellow and red. This means there's very little contrast between the Assassin and the background. It's also very bright, which means there aren't any shadows to add a feeling of depth. - The personality change felt too fast (when she changes to Thillim just before the sister kill and when she changes back just after). These could have been flushed out more with a simple closeup and some shaking head, which is an easy way to fill time and give the viewer a chance to "breath" - Feels like the story happens too quickly, with one victim coming right after the other. A few cuts to black between victims would have allowed for some offscreen "passage of time" - A lot of the dialogue overlaps the models; this is a shame because there is plenty of room in the sides for it. Also, a lot of it was hard to read (low contrast) - the starting text scroll is hard to read, mostly because there isn't enough black outline (stroke). The text color of red makes it tough because the background is red. Also, it scrolls fast for how long it takes to read -It would have been nice to see the first 2 victims' faces.
